这篇文章有10处错误Autumn 's blogHello everyone.Welcome to my blog.About meMy name is autumn.I'm from Chain.I'm 36 years old.I'm not very tall and not very thin.I have a long hair.I live in a house close Shangpin Middle school.My daghter is se

这篇文章有10处错误Autumn 's blogHello everyone.Welcome to my blog.About meMy name is autumn.I'm from Chain.I'm 36 years old.I'm not very tall and not very thin.I have a long hair.I live in a house close Shangpin Middle school.My daghter is se
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Autumn 's blog
Hello everyone.Welcome to my blog.
About me
My name is autumn.I'm from Chain.I'm 36 years old.I'm not very tall and not very thin.I have a long hair.I live in a house close Shangpin Middle school.My daghter is seven years old.She studies in Shangpin Primary School.
About my hobbies
Every day,I go to work by bike or car.My favourite sport is walk.And I also good at swiming.

这篇文章有10处错误Autumn 's blogHello everyone.Welcome to my blog.About meMy name is autumn.I'm from Chain.I'm 36 years old.I'm not very tall and not very thin.I have a long hair.I live in a house close Shangpin Middle school.My daghter is se
Autumn 's blog
Hello everyone. Welcome to my blog.
About 【myself】
My name is 【Autumn】. I'm from 【China】. I'm 36 years old. I'm not very tall and not very thin. I have 【a去掉】long hair. I live in a house 【near】 Shangpin Middle school. My 【daughter】 is seven years old. She studies in Shangpin Primary School.
About my hobbies
Every day, I go to work by bike or 【by car】. My favourite sport is 【walking】. And I 【加am】also good at 【swimming】.

Autumn 's blog
Hello everyone. Welcome to my blog.(1.改为 Hello everyone, welcome to my blog.)
About me
My name is (2.autumn 是 Autumn). I'm from (3.Chain 是 China). I'm 36 years old. I'm not...

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Autumn 's blog
Hello everyone. Welcome to my blog.(1.改为 Hello everyone, welcome to my blog.)
About me
My name is (2.autumn 是 Autumn). I'm from (3.Chain 是 China). I'm 36 years old. I'm not very tall and not very thin. I have (4.去掉a) long hair. I live in a house close (5.加 to) Shangpin Middle school. My (6.daghter 是 daughter) is seven years old. She studies (7.in 要改为 at) Shangpin Primary School.
About my hobbies
(8.Every day 是 Everyday), I go to work by bike or car. My favourite sport is (9.walk 是walking). And I (10.要加 am) also good at (11.swiming 是 swimming).
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