看看我的英语作文吧,有错改一下,Dear editor,I think tachers should visit kid's homes,because it's very important for teacher and parents know each other well.Some people think teachers should visit hid's home too.theythink face-to-face ta
看看我的英语作文吧,有错改一下,Dear editor,I think tachers should visit kid's homes,because it's very important for teacher and parents know each other well.Some people think teachers should visit hid's home too.theythink face-to-face ta
看看我的英语作文吧,有错改一下,
Dear editor,
I think tachers should visit kid's homes,because it's very important for teacher and parents know each other well.
Some people think teachers should visit hid's home too.theythink face-to-face talk will let teachers and students and parents understand each other well.so student can fell teacher's attention,and they will encouraged to study hard.Teachers can according to student's stand and give them some advices.
But a lot of people think teachers will tell parents something about students' bad behaviours,so students will be punished by their parents.teachers visit kid's home is a waste of time and energy.The point is that will bother their family member's normal lives.
Others think teachers visit kids' homes have two sides of tage.
yours
Steven
第六行，can+do，后面必须加都此，所以去掉and 都此?
看看我的英语作文吧,有错改一下,Dear editor,I think tachers should visit kid's homes,because it's very important for teacher and parents know each other well.Some people think teachers should visit hid's home too.theythink face-to-face ta
1.第一行,如果用homes说明前面kid用复数,因为一般情况一个孩子有一个家应该为kids' homes
2.句型It's important (for sb.) to do sth.所以在know前面加上to
3.第三行,kids' homes
4.第六行,学生被鼓励,所以在will前加be
5.第六行,can+do,后面必须加都此,所以去掉and
6.advice不可数,去掉s
7.倒数第二行,will前加it
你再看一下吧,好好看一下前后是否一致,名和数是否一致,最好能运用一些句型,比如强调句,从句……用一些比较好的词组,尽量多读文章,不要用太多中国人的思维方式,否则写出来的都是中国式英语,显得不伦不类,加油吧!