各位英语能手们!帮忙看看我的作文哪里错了改过来,

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各位英语能手们!帮忙看看我的作文哪里错了改过来,

各位英语能手们!帮忙看看我的作文哪里错了改过来,
各位英语能手们!帮忙看看我的作文哪里错了改过来,
 

各位英语能手们!帮忙看看我的作文哪里错了改过来,
It was windy on my winter holiday (ON)
the Spring Festival (the)
I like to sleep on my holiday because it felt nice.(去掉句号)
I like my winter holiday very much.(这样说)
I like my winter holidy very much because my family and I was all together on the Spring Festival Eve.(还是去掉句号,变换句序)
We can watch TV,eat dinner,and so on.(不要用.)
We were happy.(时态)