请英文高手帮我看看改改,帮我更改一下错误,添点枝加点叶都行,谢过!Good morning/afternoon,Honorific leadership,my dear teachers,my dear schoolmates.My name is XH,and I am twenty three years of age.I am a student of the women u

请英文高手帮我看看改改,帮我更改一下错误,添点枝加点叶都行,谢过!Good morning/afternoon,Honorific leadership,my dear teachers,my dear schoolmates.My name is XH,and I am twenty three years of age.I am a student of the women u
请英文高手帮我看看改改,
帮我更改一下错误,添点枝加点叶都行,谢过!
Good morning/afternoon,Honorific leadership,my dear teachers,my dear schoolmates.
My name is XH,and I am twenty three years of age.
I am a student of the women unite infants’ normal school in Harbin.
I like to be an infant teacher,because it’s not just a heavenliness occupation,but also I like infants very much.
I am a young girl full of energy and eager to become a member of infant teacher,so I will do my best to get this goal
I am a hard-working girl.I have lots of interest,such as singing,dancing,drawing and so on.
In my spare time,I love to play the piano,but not good at it.
That's all,thank you for your attention.

请英文高手帮我看看改改,帮我更改一下错误,添点枝加点叶都行,谢过!Good morning/afternoon,Honorific leadership,my dear teachers,my dear schoolmates.My name is XH,and I am twenty three years of age.I am a student of the women u
用词不当或错误的我没给你删,只在后面用括号给你一个正确词汇,你自己替换.其它的连续错误,直接给你改正了.你是幼教,是吧?你的学校名肯定是不对的,给我中文名,我给你重新译.你教的孩子的年龄段,再告诉我,因为infant只限 1-2岁孩子.
等你答复,然后给你一个,完整正确的翻译.
Good morning/afternoon,Honorific（honorable) leadership(leaders),my dear teachers,my dear schoolmates.
My name is XH,and I am twenty three years old.
I am a student of the women unite infants’ normal school in Harbin.
I like to be an infant teacher,because it’s not just a heavenliness(holy) occupation,but also I like infants very much.
I am a young girl full of energy and eager to become a member of infant teacher,so I will do my best to get this goal
I am a hard-working girl.I have lots of interest,such as singing,dancing,drawing and so on.
In my spare time,I love to play the piano,but I am not good at it.
That's all,thank you for your attention.

先以中文写出：
1。 women unite infants’ normal school in Harbin.
2。 infant teacher
希望可以帮到你。
Good morning/afternoon, THE HONOURABLE LEADERS, dear teachers and schoolmates.
My name is XH, an...

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先以中文写出：
1。 women unite infants’ normal school in Harbin.
2。 infant teacher
希望可以帮到你。
Good morning/afternoon, THE HONOURABLE LEADERS, dear teachers and schoolmates.
My name is XH, and I am twenty three years OLD.
I am a student of the XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX in Harbin.
I'D like to be A KINDERGARDEN teacher because it’s A SACRED JOB AND I like CHILDREN very much.
I am aN ENERGETIC young girl and KEEN to become a KINDERGARDEN teacher. THEREFORE I will do my best to ACHIEVE THIS GOAL.
I am a hard-working girl. MY HOBBIES ARE singing, dancing, drawing and so on.
I love to play piano WHEN I'M FREE ALTHOUGH I'M NOT GOOD IN IT.
That's all, thank you for your KIND attention.

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Good morning/afternoon, Honorific leadership, my dear teachers, my dear schoolmates.
My name is XH, and I am twenty three years of age.
I am a student of the women unite infants’ normal scho...

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Good morning/afternoon, Honorific leadership, my dear teachers, my dear schoolmates.
My name is XH, and I am twenty three years of age.
I am a student of the women unite infants’ normal school in Harbin.
I like to be an infant teacher, because it’s not just a heavenliness occupation, and also I like infants very much.
I am a young girl full of energy and eager to become a member of infant teacher，so I will try my best to get this goal
I am a hard-working girl. I have lots of interests, such as singing, dancing, drawing and so on.
In my spare time, I love playing the piano, but not good at it.
That's all, thank you for your attention.

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