这是我的英文作文,可能有错~this is my weekendlife on Saturday morning,I get up at seven and then eat breakfast and watch TV,very leisurely.afternoon.I read a book also play with the computer,very interesting!Night.I play the piano.I feel i

这是我的英文作文,可能有错~this is my weekendlife on Saturday morning,I get up at seven and then eat breakfast and watch TV,very leisurely.afternoon.I read a book also play with the computer,very interesting!Night.I play the piano.I feel i
这是我的英文作文,可能有错~
this is my weekend
life on Saturday morning,I get up at seven and then eat breakfast and watch TV,very leisurely.afternoon.I read a book also play with the computer,very interesting!
Night.I play the piano.I feel it is very difficult.But my friend Zhang Wenqing feel very simple
On Sunday morning.I help my friends
In the afternoon.I went shopping with my mother
My weekend is very interesting?How about you?

这是我的英文作文,可能有错~this is my weekendlife on Saturday morning,I get up at seven and then eat breakfast and watch TV,very leisurely.afternoon.I read a book also play with the computer,very interesting!Night.I play the piano.I feel i
如果这样的周末生活是一直重复的那么就用present tense（就是你用的）.但是在这里看似不是重复的那么就：
This was my weekend life. On Saturday morning, I got up at seven and had my breakfast. Afterwards, I watched television leisurely. In the afternoon, I read a book and then played with my computer. It (如果是阅读书籍和玩电脑都很有趣就把it was换成they were) was very interesting! At night, I played the piano. I felt it is very difficult (直接连下去) but my friend, Zhang Wenqing felt it simple. On Sunday morning, I helped my friends. In the afternoon, I went shopping with my mother. My weekend was very interesting? How about yours?
大致上没什么问题.就稍微帮你修改一下变得比较通顺一些.

这是我的周末
life on Saturday morning, I get up at seven and then eat breakfast and watch TV, very leisurely. afternoon. I read a book also ...

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这是我的周末
life on Saturday morning, I get up at seven and then eat breakfast and watch TV, very leisurely. afternoon. I read a book also play with the computer, very interesting!
在星期六的早上，我七点起床，然后吃早餐，看电视，很悠闲。下午好。我读了一本书，还玩电脑，很有趣！
Night. I play the piano. I feel it is very difficult. But my friend Zhang Wenqing feel very simple
晚上。我弹钢琴。我觉得很难。但我的朋友张文庆很简单
On Sunday morning. I help my friends
在星期日的早上。我帮助我的朋友
In the afternoon. I went shopping with my mother
在下午。我和妈妈去购物
My weekend is very interesting? How about you?
我的周末很有趣吗？你怎么样？
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i got up 。。 ate the breakfast 。。 watched TV 。。 in the afternoon第二行的also应该是and。。。。。。with the去掉。。。。at night played the piano都应该是过去时

最后一句my weekend is very interesting,isn'it?how abou yours