作业帮英语自我介绍修改求帮忙改写几个复杂句,添加一些连接词、衔接词T T我真没辙了
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英语自我介绍修改求帮忙改写几个复杂句,添加一些连接词、衔接词T T我真没辙了
英语自我介绍修改
求帮忙改写几个复杂句,添加一些连接词、衔接词T T我真没辙了
英语自我介绍修改求帮忙改写几个复杂句,添加一些连接词、衔接词T T我真没辙了
1,.and i born in jiangsu province a beautiful city located in southesat of China.
2.So idevised a study plan,and I'll study harder.
3,I am a girl who is optimistic...
4,as i smile a lot ,people around me feel happnies.
5.I have a dream that i can .
你的自我介绍写得蛮不错的,码字很辛苦,好孩子,祝你发言或提交作业顺利,
He去掉，and I am born in Jiangsu province.Jiangsu is a beautiful city in southeast of China. have this opportunity to be permitted... at大写，另起一句 make a good performance
As the time fli...
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He去掉，and I am born in Jiangsu province.Jiangsu is a beautiful city in southeast of China. have this opportunity to be permitted... at大写，另起一句 make a good performance
As the time flies fact 后就逗号，an easy exam to be taken to study better,I devised a study plan
who is optimistic...however转折不太恰当，therefor person who is in trouble
实在没怎么看过语法了。。。有的好像也不太对，建议用几个besides,what's more,threefor什么的，写作顺序尽量清晰一点，先是基本介绍，再来写你很荣幸进入这个学校，（分一下段），在这个学校中你会很努力，再来你的兴趣爱好，你的朋友，接着你的梦想，最后来个总结，（我很荣幸的那句话也可以放在最后写）实在写不动了。。请原谅我的懒惰，出错的地方还请各位大神指正
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