这是我的日记,March 16 wesdenessday sun after rainToday,I was late for evening class.this is because the restaurant was crowded with student,and someonecut the team.Ihave ate dinner at 5:50.then I tookmy thermous bottle to boling water houseboug

这是我的日记,March 16 wesdenessday sun after rainToday,I was late for evening class.this is because the restaurant was crowded with student,and someonecut the team.Ihave ate dinner at 5:50.then I tookmy thermous bottle to boling water houseboug
这是我的日记,
March 16 wesdenessday sun after rain
Today,I was late for evening class.this is because the restaurant was crowded with student,and someonecut the team.Ihave ate dinner at 5:50.then I tookmy thermous bottle to boling water housebought boling water.When we went backthe bedroom,the clock stuck six.Although I runfast to the best of my ability,Iwaslatefor evening class,and the head classate tell our grade adviser.The garde adviser asked me run six round on play ground next today.Iwas very unhappybecausw the the heas classmate.is ,e good friend.I was very angry.
March 21,2011 Monday rain
I have very hungry in allday today.This is because my school card had broken,so I can’t brought anything in the school.
In the morning,I borrowed school card from my classmate.But all of them school card had no money.This is because why I didn’t eat breafast today.
I borroweded school card off a classmate in the noon.His school card had seventy yuan.So I ate a rich lunch.The lunch can’t be better in all I had ate.
In the afternoon,I went out on leave.I bought many instant noodles when I stayed out.why did I bought them.Because I would eat dinner,and I had no school card.So I only can eat instant noodles.
At tweleve o’clock am,I’m writing the daily.
Match 22 Thusday sun after rain
Today,I have flet very happy.Everything was so good that I can’t find anything which made me gloony.
I got a new school card from card central.
At third evening class,I’m wirting the daily
March 23,2011 Monday rain
I have very hungry in allday today.This is because my school card had broken,so I can’t brought anything in the school.
In the morning,I borrowed school card from my classmate.But all of them school card had no money.This is because why I didn’t eat breafast today.
I borroweded school card off a classmate in the noon.His school card had seventy yuan.So I ate a rich lunch.The lunch can’t be better in all I had ate.
In the afternoon,I went out on leave.I bought many instant noodles when I stayed out.why did I bought them.Because I would eat dinner,and I had no school card.So I only can eat instant noodles.
At tweleve o’clock am,I’m writingthe daily.

这是我的日记,March 16 wesdenessday sun after rainToday,I was late for evening class.this is because the restaurant was crowded with student,and someonecut the team.Ihave ate dinner at 5:50.then I tookmy thermous bottle to boling water houseboug
日记格式首先要正确：日期和星期要写在左上角,天气写在右上角.在维持原文意思以及考虑楼主水平的基础上,对原文稍作改动,只是一些基本的语法点.
March 16 Wesdenessday sunny after rainy
Today I was late for night classes because the restaurant was filled with students and someone jumped the queue.I had supper at 5:50.Then I took my thermous bottle and went to the boiler room to get hot water.When I went back to the dormitory,the clock stuck six.Although I run as fast as I can,I was still late for night classes.The monitor told our class adviser.The class adviser asked me to run six circles around the playground tomorrow.I was very unhappy because the monitor is one of my good friends.I felt very angry.
March 21 Monday rainy
Today I am very hungry the whole day.This is because my student ID was broken and I can’t buy anything in the school.
In the morning,I wanted to borrow a school card from my classmate.But all of their cards run out of money.Then I didn’t have breakfast .
I borroweded a school card from a classmate at noon.His card had seventy yuan.So I had a big lunch.It is the best lunch I have ever had.
In the afternoon,I went out on leave.I bought many instant noodles when I stayed out.why did I buy them?Because I had to have supper and I had no student ID.I only can eat instant noodles.
At tweleve o’clock a.m.,I’m writing the daily.
Match 22 Thursday sunny after rainy
Today I flet very happy.Everything was so good that I couldn't find anything which could make me sad.
I got a new student ID from the card center.
On the third night class,I’m wirting the daily.
March 23 Monday rainy
Today I am very hungry the whole day.This is because my student ID was broken and I can’t buy anything in the school.
In the morning,I wanted to borrow a school card from my classmate.But all of their cards run out of money.Then I didn’t have breakfast .
I borroweded a school card from a classmate at noon.His card had seventy yuan.So I had a big lunch.It is the best lunch I have ever had.
In the afternoon,I went out on leave.I bought many instant noodles when I stayed out.why did I buy them?Because I had to have supper and I had no student ID.I only can eat instant noodles.
At tweleve o’clock a.m.,I’m writing the daily.

that was because …with students…i ate…"invalid thermous"…and bought…back to…ran as fast as i can…told…to run 6 rounds…"head student?monitor"…all day long…that was…to the school…card from…at noon…better ever…小心时态错误哦 短语多查 别自己造了

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